작성일 : 22-12-25 13:00
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https://adventurekorea.com/amazing-ullengdo-dokdo-island-trip-during-chuseok-holiday/
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| 서한 |
시정서한 |
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| 매체 |
웹사이트
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| 이슈 |
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| 서한보내는곳 |
info@adventurekorea.com |
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| 오류내용 |
독도를 영문으로 Dokdo island라 표기함 |
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| E-mail / Contact |
solkeam@gmail.com |
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서론 |
Hello this is Sol Keam, Korean high school student. Recently I visited your website and saw your trip promote. However there is small wrong information, so I write this e-mail.
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| 본론 |
On your website, you wrote Ulleungdo island, and Dokdo island. However this marking have little problem. In korean ‘do’ which in “Ulleungdo” and “Dokdo” means island. So, in your marking, you use isalnd twice, and this is the tiny problem in your website
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| 결론 |
In your website, you promote that Dokdo is Korean territory, and you provide people to visit Dokdo. I am very thankful to doing this job. Moreover, without this little problem, it will be perfect website to promote Dokdo to people. Thank you.
Sincerely, Sol Keam |
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