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https://dynastydaily.weebly.com/hermit-kingdom.html |
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| 오류내용 |
한국을 hermit kingdom이라고 표기함 |
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서론 |
Hello. Nice to meet you. My name is Eui In-young, and I am a high school student in Korea. I am currently promoting the history, society, and culture of Korea through various internet sites. Like today, when I visited your internet site, I came to contact you because you seem to have a big misunderstanding about Korea and Korea today. Please read through and correct the mistake.
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I saw the category that introduced Korea as well as the introduction of India, Taj Mahal and Muggle on the internet. However, unlike the introduction from other countries, Korea is named 'Hermit Kingdom'. Of course, the rulers of the late Joseon Dynasty adopted a policy of isolation (a policy of blocking trade with foreign countries by shutting down the country), but the Joseon Dynasty reopened its doors and now actively engaged in foreign policy and trade with other countries. At that time it might have been called hermit kingdom, but now it is clearly a country called Korea, so please change the wrong name on your internet site to the correct name. Other than this, I don't think there's anything else to correct because it's based on facts. Please change the name of Korea you used correctly.
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First of all, thank you for reading my long sentence. At first, I was angry about the part where you described Korea as 'hermit kingdom', but I didn't know that Westerners used to call Joseon that way. Of course, it is not hermit in Korea today.If my writing is persuasive, please correct it as soon as possible! I think many people will hermit Korea! I will continue to look at your posts. Thank you for your hard work. Thank you for reading my long sentence so far. Have a nice day |
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