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Hello, I am a Korean student who accidentally saw your writing. The tilte was; S. Korea collected seabed samples near Takeshima island without Japan's consent, but there is something wrong and I want to inform you.
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First of all, Dokdo is not Takeshima. Takeshima is a Japanese name that Japan claims to be Dokdo as their land. Therefore, you should mark it as'Dokdo', not 'Takeshima'. Also, it is not correct to mark the East Sea of Korea as'sea of japan'. Please check this again.Second, your writing is wrong. In the article, it was said that Korea collected seabed samples without Japan's consent, which is not correct. In the first place, Dokdo is our land, so there is no need to obtain Japanese consent. Your article contains incorrect information.
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There are also many helpful posts on this site. However, I would like you to revise the overall content of this article. Thank you. |
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