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https://yanghyemin.wordpress.com/tag/dakeshima/
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https://yanghyemin.wordpress.com/tag/dakeshima/ |
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| 오류내용 |
독도 영토표기 |
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Hello Here is Seo - Hyun in South Korea, Seoul. I send you an E-mail message for you because I want to correct some errors. This is for our country’s glory and I want you to listen about the reason why I need you to correct some errors. I know this is very demanding work, but your one step will make a great movement to our country. We're going to talk about it now. First, about why Dokdo is Korean territory, and simply I'll tell me about the history. And do you have any question, just call me anytime. I'm always available to your questions. And, We want you to make correct right now. As soon as possible.
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The island Dokdo is receiving enormous attention in many countries. Imagine some images that your country's territory is lost. It will be sad thing. Now Dokdo is receiving the attention. And there are two main reasons for this. It is the problem of land and resources. When get the terretory of Dokdo, there is they can get abundant resources and also get the island because of the worldwide law of land. But, I want to emphasize the facts. Dokdo has never been the land of the Japan. There is some clear evidence in recent past, and very long past. When the Chosun dynasty,(1400~1900) there is some written evidence that Japanese acknoledge that Dokdo is land of Republic of Korea. In addition, In 1500s, Chosun's man, An Young Bok really visit the Japan and get some evidence about the land of Dokdo. And also, threre is no Japanese live in the Dokdo in anytime. They just visit a territory because of fishery. So, I want to change your error that you used the map that says Takeshima. It is the Japanese expression that calling Dokdo. I know it would be hard work, but, please, recommend about our feelings. And acording to several rules about naming some ocean and seas, we have to make united name by both country. And we already make that we have to call EastSea. So, absolutely we can say that the Sea of Japan isn't correct.
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We're thank a lot to read my whole, long passages. Also I really hope that you will correct this errors. And if you read this, please do some reactions that I can find this. I think that small steps make some great movement and chages. So can you be the helper for our country? I really hope to. In addition, do you have any questions and how to correct this, Please call me in e-mail. So lastly, I really hope to chage from the Takeshima to Dokdo. I'm gonna waitiing for your responding. Happy new year! Thank you. And have a careful day. We are gonna waiting for you until be correct those wrong name. And, always waiting for questions. |
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