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http://countrystudies.us/south-korea/46.htm |
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| 오류내용 |
일제강점기 시대에 일본이 한국의 경제 발전에 큰 기여를 했다고 써놓음 |
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weeinyoung@naver.com |
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서론 |
Hello, I am a female student attending high school in Korea. My name is 'Wi-in Young' and I am 19 years old as of 2021. These days, I've been searching various websites for miswritten articles about Korea and writing articles that ask the webmaster to correct them. While I was wandering around various sites today, I saw your writing and found out that there were many errors in it, so I wrote like this. Please read the article until the end and listen to my argument.
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First of all, I'm not sure how you wrote this sentence, but I can't say that Japan's role during the colonial period contributed to the economic development of Korea. From 1930 to 1945, during the Japanese colonial era, Japan built railways, transported trains, established companies, and developed various farming methods, but did they make Korea financially wealthy? Not at all. Japan took the rice, ore resources, food, cotton fabrics, etc. from the railroads laid in Korea, greatly increased the yield of rice in Korea, and all of them were taken to Japan. Due to this kind of barbarity of Japan, Korea has experienced poor people in poverty, and many people have evacuated. I can't accept the argument that Japan helped Korea's economic development significantly. However, Korea achieved economic development thanks to the passion and efforts of Koreans.
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Did you read my writing well? If you think my argument is reasonable, please delete or revise the article. Many Koreans are angry at the sight. I hope you can write with proper historical knowledge from now on. Thank you for reading the long text. Please fix it! I will continue to read your writing well. Thank you. |
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