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| 서한 |
시정서한 |
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웹사이트
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| 이슈 |
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| 언어 |
영어
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| 서한보내는곳 |
https://www.osac.gov/Country/SouthKorea/Content/Detail/Report/6d2ced24-cc8e-4077-8b75-15f4aeb80d5f |
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| 오류내용 |
한국을 범죄가 많은 국가라고 묘사함. |
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| E-mail / Contact |
https://www.osac.gov/Country/SouthKorea/Content/Detail/Report/6d2ced24-cc8e-4077-8b75-15f4aeb80d5f |
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서론 |
| Hello, I'm Hahyeok Im, the student of South Korea. There is a reason for sending an email to you. I saw your website about how to travel in Korea. However, I saw some content little bit looks strange. Therefore, I want to talk about what looks strange. |
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You talked about the Korea's public order. But, I think it was overstated. Keeping careful is important and I recommend to tourists that keep careful, but I think that telling only facts is more important. Korea has the one of the best public order in world. However, you emphasized the sexual crimes, and pick pocketing.
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| 결론 |
I know that you love Korea. However, please rewrite some for other tourists who want to visit Korea. I recommend to rewrite that Korea has really good public orders, but I think keeping carefulness is also important. |
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