작성일 : 21-04-24 23:08
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https://elviajero.elpais.com/elviajero/2016/07/08/actualidad/1467993114_752175.html
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| 매체 |
웹사이트
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| 이슈 |
동해
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| 서한보내는곳 |
elpaismadrid@prisabs.com |
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| 오류내용 |
동해를 "Mardel de japon" 이라고 잘못 표기함 |
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Whjsynergy@naver.com |
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서론 |
Hello. My name is Justin Woo, and I am a eighth grade student in South Korea. Before I move on to my points, I would first like to applaud the magnificent work you have done, by introducing the fundamental cultures of Asia. I am grateful for the work of spreading the importance within our own culture, and would be grateful for you to move on your activities in the future. However, I have found a minor problem with one of the articles you have written, and I hope that you could apply my advice so that it resolves the problem.
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| 본론 |
To begin with, in your article of, El camino de Kobo Daishi en Japón | El Viajero | EL PAÍS (elpais.com), I have found that you have named the sea "Mardel de Japon". However, that is an incorrect phrase, since the "Mardel of japon" is actually called "East sea", and it belongs to the Republic of Korea, not Japan. The reason why Japan is spreading the false information is because of "Dokdo", a territory of Korea. To explain further, Korea is made up with many different islands. Dokdo is almost at the end of Korea's territory, next to the island named, "Ulleng-do". They are trying to take over the rights of having Dokdo. The reason is because the island carries many valuable minerals like "gas hydrate", which can be used to replace fossil fuels in the future. Also, there are many ocean creatures living in Dokdo. You might be familiar with the news about China crossing the East sea to fish, and the marine police trying to arrest them. So, because this is an sincere issue to our country, I hope that you can change the name to East sea, or at least add it under.
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| 결론 |
By reading the articles you have written before, I see that the articles are very coherent. However, our country is desperate. Korea is at the brink of losing the authority, and there is a great need for your help. This might not seem much, but it will help to pique the interest of people who visit your website, and this is an great advantage to our country. If you have further questions, please email me at "whjsynergy@naver.com". Thank you for reading this, and I would sincerely like to have your cooperation with this issue. |
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