작성일 : 21-05-07 19:09
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한과영이서현
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https://www.dw.com/en/south-korea-starts-drills-at-japan-claimed-islands/a-50155334
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시정서한 |
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웹사이트
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| 이슈 |
동해
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영어
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| 서한보내는곳 |
https://www.dw.com/en/south-korea-starts-drills-at-japan-claimed-islands/a-50155334 |
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| 오류내용 |
독도 영토표기 |
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| E-mail / Contact |
12leeseohyun@gmail.com |
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서론 |
Hello, Here is Seo Hyun Lee in Seoul of South korea and I am a high school students in KSA of KAIST. I send you an E-mail message for you because I want to make some errors to be right. This is for our country’s glory and I hope you to take care about the reason why We need you to correct some errors. I know this is very difficult and boring work, but your one job will make a great movement to our country. We're going to talk about the problem right now. First of all, about why Dokdo is Korea's territory, and simply I'll tell me about the history. And if you have any question, just call me anytime. I'm always available to your questions. And, We want you to make it correct right now please. As soon as possible.
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| 본론 |
The island Dokdo is receiving enormous and great attention from many countries. Let's Imagine some images that your country's territory is lost by other countries. And it is your country. It will be angry and sad thing. Now the island Dokdo is receiving the attention. And there are two main reasons for this. It is the problem of land and resources. When the Japan get terretory of the island Dokdo, there is they can get abundant resources and also get the island because of the worldwide law of land. But, I want to emphasize the facts right now. The island Dokdo has never been the land of Japan. there is some clear evidence in recent past, and very long past. When the Chosun dynasty,(from 1400 to1900) there is some written evidence that Japanese acknoledge that island Dokdo is land of Republic of Korea. In addition, In 1500s, chosun's man, An Young Bok really visit the Japan and get some evidence about the land of dokdo. And also, threre is no Japanese live in the island Dokdo in anytime at history. They just visited the territory because of fishery ilegaly. So, I want to change your error that you used the map that says the Takeshima. This is the Japanese expression that calling Dokdo. I know it would be hard work, but, please, recommend about our feelings and the fact. And according to several rules about naming some ocean and seas, we have to make united name by both country. we already make that we have to call as EastSea instead of Sea of Japan. So, absolutely we can say that the Sea of Japan is not correct.
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I'm thanks a lot for reading my whole, a long passage. Also We really hope that you will correct this errors. And if you read this, please do some reactions and answers that I can find this. I think that small steps make some great movement and chages. So can you be the helper for our country? I really hope so. In addition, if you have any questions about problems and how to correct this, Please call me in e-mail. So lastly, I really hope to change from the Takeshima to the Dokdo, Sea of Japan into East sea too. I'm gonna waiting for your responding. Thank you. And have a careful day! We are gonna waiting for you until be correct those wrong name. And, always waiting for questions. |
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