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| 서한 |
시정서한 |
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| 매체 |
웹사이트
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| 이슈 |
동해
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| 언어 |
중국어
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| 서한보내는곳 |
ko.wikipedia.org |
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| 오류내용 |
동해를 중국어로 일본해(日本海)라 표기함 |
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| E-mail / Contact |
kny3691@gmail.com |
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서론 |
Hi, my name is Na-yun Kim. I am a ninth grade student in South Korea. Today, I am going to talk about why Dokdo is Korean territory. Before I talk about Dokdo is our territory, I want to tell you that the website which you wrote is wrong. Please fix your content if you read my municipal administration letter. I hope that you can understand what I am going to talk about.
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| 본론 |
To begin with, I will talk about the reason why Dokdo is Korean territory. Dokdo has historically been a territory of Korea since Silla subjugated Usan-guk in 512. At this time, it was called Usan-do, but in the Joseon Dynasty it was called Sambongdo, Gajido, and Seokdo. In 1900, Dokdo was officially incorporated into Gangwon-do as an annex to Ulleung-gun, according to Article 41 of the Edict of Emperor Gojong. In addition, the name Dokdo as an administrative place was first used by Shim Heung-taek, the head of Ulleung-gun in 1906, and it was incorporated into Gyeongsangbuk-do by the reorganization of administrative districts in 1914, and it is reaching today. Therefore, Dokdo is Korean territory, not Japanese. Please change the word '日本海' into '东海'. Sea of Japan is wrong.
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| 결론 |
It is such a great article which you wrote, but there are some mistakes which I found out. This is the reason why I decided to write the letter to you. Please change what I talked to you before if you read my letter. And if you have some questions, please emaill me. Thank you for reading my letter and I hope you the better of luck in the future. |
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