작성일 : 21-09-24 21:40
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한과영이서현
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http://affiliate-network.co/tag/takeshima/
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시정서한 |
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웹사이트
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영어
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| 서한보내는곳 |
http://affiliate-network.co/tag/takeshima/ |
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| 오류내용 |
독도 영토표기 |
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| E-mail / Contact |
12leeseohyun@gmail.com |
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서론 |
Hello, My name is lee seo hyun and I am from a high school student qt Korea. exactly Korea science Academy of KAIST. Few days ago, I visited at your website and found one problem. This is problems about the island Takeshima. Your site has a wrong statement and name that the Takeshima is in the Japanese territory, and I think it is right to correct it. Therefore, I will solve this international territory problem between korea and japan and add the rationale for this argument to the text. Please read this message and fix the problems in your site. This is a message related to a violation of international law, and failure to resolve it may result in royal penalty to you. This message has been sent to warn for you about your website and to fix the problem. |
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There is an island on the sea between Korea and Japan. It is a small islands called Takeshima and Dokdo in each japan and korea and some little rocks around. Called Takeshima in Japan, the island is currently attracting a lot of attention from both countries. Because it is located between the two countries' front sea, the Dokdo is a beautiful island that is quitely precious and valuable. That is the reason we, the Joseon Dynasty, have been managing and governing this island Dokdo from a long time ago, after the three kingdoms period. In fact, in the history and records of the two countries, it is recorded that Chosun has been ruled the Dokdo, and it is absolutely not in the Japanese territory. Japan has been consistently claiming these Dokdo Islands recently, but this is clearly not correct and wrong. International law and historically, Dokdo has never been in a Japanese territory, nor has its name ever been called Takeshima and not the Dokdo. Besides these facts and history, it is a self-evident and some natural facts that Dokdo is belong to Korean territory. If Japan's insistence on deterrence continues, relations with Korea will deteriorate as well as cause several social errors. This is clearly incorrect, and you would want something not to be happen. This message is sent to correct the name Takeshima on your websites. Please remove the claim that Dokdo is in the Japanese territory on your website and write correctly spell the name Takeshima as to Dokdo. This concludes the message
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We are filling thankful from you very much for reading the whole long passages about your website. Also, we are really want you to make correct some of these errors about the Dokdo. And if you have read all of this messages, please give to us a response and then answer that we can find out of it. we think small steps can make big movements and changes in our history and territory for both japan and korea. So would you be a major helper to our country? we really hope so you would be. Also, if you have any doubt about errors or solutions, please contact us by email. So, the last thing about Takeshima Island, the name Dokdo island to the sincere wish to change in the name. We look forward to hearing from you about this messages and results of your sites. Thank you for reading this whole passage. And be careful. we will wait until the wrong name is corrected. And We are always waiting for questions from you. |
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