작성일 : 20-12-21 00:08
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https://www.economist.com/asia/2018/09/27/south-korea-craves-foreign-approval-of-its-claim-to-two-tiny-rocks
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시정서한 |
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| 매체 |
웹사이트
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| 이슈 |
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| 언어 |
영어
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| 서한보내는곳 |
https://www.economist.com/ |
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| 오류내용 |
독도를 Takeshima 로 표기함. |
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| E-mail / Contact |
robinredic12@gmail.com |
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Hello this is Seok Ho Jeong. I Send a Email message for you because I want to correct some errors. This is for our country’s glory and I hope you to listen about the reason why I require you to correct errors.Please listen to my words carefully and I'm going to talk about it now. First of all, about why Dokdo is Korean territory, and simple I'll tell me about the history. And do you have any question, just call me anytime. I'm always available to your questions. |
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| 본론 |
| Nowdays, Dokdo is receiving great attention in many countries. Dokdo is receiving the attention. Plus, there are two main reasons for this. It is the problem of land and resources. When we have the terretory of Dokdo, there is they can get abundant resources and also get the land because of the worldwide law of land. Howerver, I want to emphasize the facts. Dokdo has never been the land of Japan. there is some clear evidence in recent past, and very long past. When the Chosun dynasty,(1400~1900) there is some written evidence that Japanese acknoledge that Dokdo is land of Korea. Plus, In 1500s, Chosun's man, An Young Bok really visit the Japan and get some evidence about the land of Dokdo. So, I want to change your error that you used the map that says Takeshima. It is the Japanese expression that calling Dokdo. I know it will be hard work, but, please, recommend about our feelings. We just faced some crisis that oneday just our teriirory is disappeared. |
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I know it is a hard day because of Covid-19 and many Things. And Thank you for reading my whole, long passages. And I really hope that you will correct this errors. And if you read this, please do some reactions that I can find this. I think that small steps make some great movement and chages. So can you be the helper to our country? I really hope to. Plus, do you have any questions and how to correct this, Please call me in e-mail. So lastly, I really hope to chage the Takeshima into Dokdo. I'm gonna waitiing for your responding. Have a nice day and Happy coming New years!! thank you.
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