작성일 : 21-07-01 20:41
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한과영이서현
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https://www.voanews.com/east-asia-pacific/south-korea-begins-drills-near-disputed-islands
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시정서한 |
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웹사이트
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동해
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영어
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https://www.voanews.com/east-asia-pacific/south-korea-begins-drills-near-disputed-islands |
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독도 영토표기 |
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12leeseohyun@gmail.com |
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Hello ,My name is Lee Seo-Hyun in the South Korea Seoul. and I am in a high school student in KSA, Korea science academy.We send you an Email message to you, because I want to make some errors about the Dokdo to be correct. This is for our country’s glory and I hope you to take care about the problem why We need you to correct some errors on your web site about Dokdo. I knew this is very demanding work, but your one job will make a great movement to our country. I am going to talk about the problem now. First of the all, about why the island Dokdo is Korean land, and simply I'll tell you about the history. And if you have any question, just call me anytime. I'm always available to get your questions. And, We want you to make it correct right now please
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The island Dokdo between Korea and Japan is receiving enormous and great attention from many countries around us. Let's Imagine some situations that your country's land is lost by other countries. And if it is your country. It will be angry and both sad thing. Now the island Dokdo is received the attentions. And there are two main reasons for this issues. It is the problem of land and resources. When the Japan get the territory of the island Dokdo, there is law of land that can get abundant resources and also get the island because of the worldwide law of land. But, I want to emphasize the facts about the Dokdo right now. The island Dokdo has never been had the land of Japan. there is some clear, right evidence in recent past, and very long past history. When the Chosun dynasty,(1492~1900) there is some written evidence that Japanese acknoledge that island Dokdo is land of Republic of Korea,ROK. And, In 1500s, chosun's man, An- Young Bok really visit the Japan governments and get some evidences about the land of dokdo. And also, threre is no more Japanese live in the island Dokdo in history. They just visited the territory because of fishery ilegaly, not properly. So, I want to change your problem that you used the map that says the name as the Takeshima. This is the Japanese expression that calling the name as Dokdo. I know it would be hard work, but, please, recommend about our feelings and laws. In addition more several rules about naming some ocean and seas, we have to make united name by both country. we already make that we have to call as the EastSea instead of Sea of Japan. So, absolutely we can say that the Sea of Japan is not correct.
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T think that I thanks a lot for reading our whole, a long passage. Also I will really hope that you will correct this problems about dokdo. And if you read this, please do some reactions and answers that I can find this errors. I think that small steps make some great movement and changes in both our history. So can you be the helper for our country? I really hope so. Also, if you have any questions about problems and how to correct this, Please call me in email. So lastly, I really hope to change from the name the island Takeshima to the island name Dokdo. I will be waiting for your responding about this. Thank you for reading messages. And have a careful day! We are going to waiting for you until it will be correct those wrong name. And, always waiting for questions. |
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