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시정서한 |
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웹사이트
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| 이슈 |
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| 언어 |
영어
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| 서한보내는곳 |
https://www.worldnomads.com/ |
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| 오류내용 |
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| E-mail / Contact |
kny3691@gmail.com |
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서론 |
Hello, I am a third year student at Kuyrong middle school. I decided to write this letter because the article which you had wrote has something wrong. When I read your article, I want to correct the wrong content which you made. Before reading this article, I want you to remove the negative perception of South Korea. Also, please remember that I am not trying to point out that your article is bad.
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First, thank you for writing the article that health care in Korea is of high quality and very efficient. When I read that sentence I felt good to your article, but as I read it, my feelings changed for the worse. I found out that your article has some information about health issues in South Korea. Some disease you wrote such as, Yellow dust, Hepatitis A, Malaria, Traveler's diarrhea and Hand, foot and Mouth diseases can make people sick but it is not obvious. Also, you wrote about toilets in South Korea. It is true that some toilets are not well equipped but not all the toilets are the worst. You negatively polluted the image of South Korea by writing facts that were not actually proven. I want you to change your article.
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| 결론 |
Please take a look at my letter and change your article. Some of these statements may sound pointy, but everything I have said so far is true. I hope that the negative perception of Korea will change even a little bit through the letter I wrote. Also, if you have any questions about writing an article about Korea, you can email me. Thank you. |
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