작성일 : 21-06-23 19:36
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한과영이서현
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http://english.khan.co.kr/khan_art_view.html?artid=202103311727002&code=710100
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시정서한 |
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| 매체 |
웹사이트
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| 이슈 |
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| 언어 |
영어
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| 서한보내는곳 |
http://english.khan.co.kr/khan_art_view.html?artid=202103311727002&code=710100 |
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| 오류내용 |
독도 영토표기 |
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| E-mail / Contact |
12leeseohyun@gmail.com |
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서론 |
Hello, This is SeoHyun-Lee in South Korea, Seoul. And i am high school student in KSA. I send you a E-mail message for you because I want to correct some errors in your website. This is for our country’s glory and I hope you to listen about the reason why I need you to correct some errors. I know this is very demanding work, but your one step will make a great movement to our country. We're going to talk about the problem now. First of all, about why Dokdo is Korea's territory, and simply I'll tell me about the history. And do you have any question, just call me anytime. I'm always available to your questions. And, We want you to make it correct right now.
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The island Dokdo is receiving great attention in many countries. Let's Imagine some images that your country's territory is lost. It will be angry and sad thing. Now the Dokdo is receiving the attention. And there are two main reasons for this. It is the problem of our lands and resources. When the chosun get the terretory of Dokdo, there is they can get abundant resources and also get the island because of the worldwide law of land. But, I want to emphasize the facts. The Dokdo has never been the land of Japan. there is some clear evidence in recent past, and very long past. When the Chosun dynasty,(1400~1900) there is some written evidence that Japanese acknoledge that Dokdo is land of Republic of Korea. In addition, In 1500s, chosun's man, An Young Bok really visit the Japan and get some evidence about the land of dokdo. And also, threre is no Japanese people live in the Dokdo in anytime. They just visit the territory because of fishery. So, I want to change your error that you used the map that says Takeshima. This is the Japanese expression that calling the island Dokdo. I know it would be hard work, but, please, recommend about our feelings. And acording to several rules about naming some ocean and seas, we have to make united name by both country. we already make that we have to call East Sea. So, absolutely we can say that the Sea of Japan is not correct.
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I am thanks a lot to read my whole, a long message. Also I really hope that you will correct this errors. And if you read this, please do some reactions that I can find this problems. I think that small steps make some great movement and changes. So can you be the helper for our country? I really hope so. In addition, do you have any questions and how to correct this, Please call me in e-mail. So lastly, I really hope to chage from the Takeshima to the island Dokdo. Korea will be waitiing for your responding. Happy new year 2021! Thank you. And have a careful day! We are gonna waiting for you until be correct those wrong name. And, always waiting for questions. |
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