작성일 : 21-09-24 21:39
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한과영이서현
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http://discoveryourmojo.blogspot.com/2012/08/japan-busy-reclaiming-their-territorial.html
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시정서한 |
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웹사이트
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| 서한보내는곳 |
http://discoveryourmojo.blogspot.com/2012/08/japan-busy-reclaiming-their-territorial.html |
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| 오류내용 |
독도 영토표기 |
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12leeseohyun@gmail.com |
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서론 |
Hello, My name is seo hyun lee and I am from a high school student in Korea. exactly Korea science Academy of KAIST. Few days ago, I visited in your website and found one problem. This is problems about the island Takeshima. Your site has a wrong statement and name about that Takeshima is Japanese territory, and I think it is right to correct it. Therefore, I will solve this international territory problem and add the rationale for this argument to the texts. Please read this whole message and fix the problems in your site. This is a message related to a violation of international laws, and failure to resolve it may results in royal penalties to you. This message has been sent to warn to you about your website and to fix the problem. |
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| 본론 |
There is an island between Korea and Japan. It is a small islands called Takeshima or Dokdo and some little rocks around. Called Takeshima in Japan, the island is currently attracting a lot of attention from both countries, korea and japan. Because it is located between the two countries' sea, the Dokdo is a beautiful island that is quite important and valuable. That is the reason why we, the Joseon Dynasty, have been managing and governing this island Dokdo from a long time ago, after the three kingdoms period ends. In fact, in the history and records of the two countries, it is recorded that Chosun have been ruled the Dokdo, and it is absolutely not Japanese territory. Japan has been consistently claiming these Dokdo Islands recently, but this is clearly wrond and not correct. International law and historically, Dokdo has never been a Japanese territory, nor has its name ever been called Takeshima and not the Dokdo. As we know by these facts and history, it is a self-evident and natural facts that Dokdo is belong to the Korean territory. If Japan's insistence on deterrence continues, relations with Korea will deteriorate as well as cause some social errors. This is clearly incorrect, and you would want something not to happen. This message is sent to correct the name Takeshima in your website. Please remove the claim about that Dokdo is Japanese territory on your website and write correctly spell the name from Takeshima into Dokdo. This concludes the message
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| 결론 |
I am filling thankful to you very much for reading the whole long passages about your website. Also, we are really want you to make correct these errors about the Dokdo. And if you have read all of this messages, please give to me a response and then answer that I can find out of it. I think small steps can make big movements and changes in our history and territory. So would you be a major helper to our country? I really hope so you would be. Also, if you have any doubt about errors or solutions, please contact us to email. So, the last thing about Takeshima Island, the name Dokdo island to the sincere wish to change in the its name. We look forward to hearing from you about this messages and results of your sites. Thank you for reading whole passage. And be careful. I will wait until the wrong name is corrected. And We are always waiting for questions from you. |
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