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독도를 다케시마(takeshima)라고 표기했고 East Sea를 Sea of Japan이라고 표기했다 |
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online@weeklyeleven.com |
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Dear elevenmyanmar.comThis is Dawhi Kim, a middle school student in South Korea. I would like to ask you a favor about the map on your website,
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On your website , you included a map, but there is a problem. Historically and under international territory, Dokdo is part of Korea. Many people are still confused with this names between Takeshima and Dokdo, but the owner is Korea. Takeshima is made up name by Japan to occupy the sea around Dokdo.In history in Japan, there is a guy called Hachiamon that was died by the Japan government. The reason why he is dead, he went into Dokdo. There is a map that was used in a judgement of him, and that is telling us that Dokdo is the part of Korea. Next, Sea of Japan should be called East Sea. According to international organization, "if each of two more countries use different name, international organization advises the name's simplification,and if can't do, it has to use both names." So I hope you to change the name to East Sea.
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Your websites are giving various information to global people. But if you change those two words, I surely think that it will be better and more specific. If you don't mind to change those names, I hope you to write two names. And if you don't mind to change it, please give me a reply email with your opinion to this email. I look forward to it:) Sincerely
Dawhi Kim |
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