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시정서한 |
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| 매체 |
웹사이트
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| 이슈 |
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| 언어 |
영어
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| 서한보내는곳 |
https://www.washingtonpost.com/ |
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| 오류내용 |
한국은 중국의 일부였다. |
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| E-mail / Contact |
kny3691@gmail.com |
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서론 |
Hello, I am Na-yun Kim, third grade student, who is attending Guryong middle school. I decided to write this letter while reading your article because it has wrong information. You wrote the article about what Donald Trump, former U.S president said but he said something wrong, so I would like to tell you what is wrong and how to fix the article.
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According to your article, Donald Trump said, "He then went into the history of China and Korea. Not North Korea, Korea. And you know, you're talking about thousands of years...and many wars. And Korea actually used to be a part of China." The last sentence, Korea actually used to be part of China, is wrong information. There is no evidence that Korea was a part of China in the past. Actually, it is wrong. I know that you wrote the statement Trump said but he said wrong information. Lots of people will think that misinformation is right because of the article you wrote.
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| 결론 |
I believe you read all of my letter and I hope you will change your article. I am not criticizing your writing for being bad. Please remember there is no evidence that Korea was a part of China and it is actually wrong information. I hope you understand what I am talking about and I hope you can write better articles in the future. Thank you, good luck. |
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